Tainted

I can't stop; The taste is just so bitter

Look at me through the melting mirror
And tell me what you can see from there
Maybe a shape that you can't discern
As you are splitting me up in halves

Just because I wanted to be with you

In the same picture frame
Trying to be part of your happiness
But all kinds of poison kill eventually

And it’s then I realize that

Some things are better than drugs
But I fall again and again
When I see what achieved you have

So taint me, pollute me, profane me,
Pour down all your poison in me,
Bury me as deep as you can
And erase every trace of me

So taint me, pollute me, profane me,
Pour down all your poison in me,
Bury me as deep as you can
And pretend that you never knew me

And just because of being with you

Yeah, just because of being with you
I will end all of this right now
And you can’t even imagine how

Sometimes I find it so hard

But take my word for it and be aware it’s not
For you don’t need a prescription
For drug addicition

So taint me, pollute me, profane me,
Pour down all your poison in me,
Bury me as deep as you can (Some things are better than drugs)
And erase every trace of me

So taint me, pollute me, profane me, (Some things are better than drugs)
Pour down all your poison in me,
Bury me as deep as you can (Some things are better than drugs)
And pretend that you never knew me (Hear me when I say)
 
Some things are better than drugs
Some things are better than drugs
Some things are better than drugs
Some things are better than drugs
Some things are better than drugs
Some things are better than drugs

 

Author's Note

I'm not addicted to any kind of drug by the way :3

Reviews

[Ian]

Well, this is a great writing my friend =D
Probably the best one of your poems...NO... Certainly the best one of your poems!
This is actually the kind of writing I like the most.
It's so well written... Your feelings are very well expressed on this poem!
Congratulations!
Wonderful write!
My favorite lines are:

"So taint me, pollute me, profane me,
Pour down all your poison in me,
Bury me as deep as you can
And erase every trace of me

So taint me, pollute me, profane me,
Pour down all your poison in me,
Bury me as deep as you can
And pretend that you never knew me"

The are so full of emotion!
What can I say? It's really good!
Applauses for you my friend!
Great write!

[...MysteryGirl...]

This is like a really song.
I could feel the melody between every line.
Awsome Write!

[Ingie the Blue]

love is a drug (has been proven)

Excellent, I felt as if the emotion was puring over each line
and its so realistic in a romanticized kind of way..
If this was a song, i would listen to it repeatedly

[darkgurl]

Some things are better than drugs
But I fall again and again
When I see what achieved you have

So very true and well said, Great write, so well written....Kim