Blue

Perhaps I should just keep on searching; And maybe I won't drown

So long searching for your kind

So far and I can't find

 

Going right across the sea

Struggling while trying to breath and swim

Lying to myself a little more to see

How long can I last without stopping to breath

 

How long can I keep on going like this

Feels like I'll never find and exit to this

So many open paths leading to the same spot

In the end, the desire of my own demise

 

But should I just keep swimming a little more

Before I decide to give up

I I can lie to myself a little more

To find out that it isn't beyond

 

The infinite darkness of the ocean

I try to overcome as it strangles my throath

Perhaps I must fo a but further to see

That the effort was not worth after all

 

And I imagine of what could have been

Smiling, aparently I'm happy

But I know there's nothing else to see

To wherever I am trying to swim

 

And maybe it could be that the sea hides it...

If I let myself go forward like this...

Stop struggling and fighting against my destiny...

And become just some more of...

 

The infite darkness of the ocean

I try to overcome strangles my throat

Perhaps I should just give in

Take my last breath and hopt to see it soon...

 

If I can find it...

But as long as I can't see it...

 

I'll down in the sea of my dreams

Author's Note

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Reviews

[...MysteryGirl...]

Keep swimming until you can't take it no more.
Sometimes swimming the extra minutes wil make a difference.
Love it!
Keep Writing!

[Ingie the Blue]

Keep Swimming, the effort counts.
Lovely, sad, nostalgic, just shows the daily struggle. You are amazing!

[Ian]

This is different to your other writings...
This is a really sad poem I would say... Yes... I've felt like this... Sometimes you wonder if you should keep
on going... or if you just should give up...
This poem is deep my friend... Feelings well expressed...
Great write!