The Disease of War

This is my first song without a religious theme. And please don't get me wrong, I support our troops. However, this song shows my feelings on war regardless. It is not meant to put Bush down, because I support Bush. Simply my feelings on war, nothing more

THE DISEASE OF WAR

 

Machine guns

on the run

Shoot at will

Shoot to kill

Men into slaughterers

Killing wifes and daughters

All that's right has faltered

All that's right is altered

 

This is war

Nothing more

People killed

Blood is spilled

This is war

 

Atom bombs

Droppin' down

Nations fall

Kill them all

The saints become diseased

All righteousness deceaced

All the world is decieved

And the lies are believed

 

This is war

Nothing more

People die

People cry

This is war

Reviews

[Lynx]

And the lies are believed

I think that is the only line that I feel sounds a bit weird, seemed kind of forced. I really liked the rest of the song/poem. Awesome, wish I could listen to it one day. xD. Good luck.