Just Help

Just Help

A Poem by Demmi

The only point in life
Is to take another's strife
To make it become your own
To help them out
Through harshest storms
Through stormy seas
Patiently
Through everything
And you will see
The greatest rewards
Are not physical
To achieve happiness
How its simple
Don't make a fuss
Just help people

© 2009 Demmi


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What beautiful words of wisdom. Sometimes we get so locked into our own world that we forget that we are friends, family, and loved ones to other people who depend on us for comfort and understanding. It is a beautiful thing to take a little while and remember to reach beyond ourselves and remember that there are other things which are also important in our lives.

I love the simplicity and straight forward wording to this piece. You are precisely on point with the whole piece, nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good image and ideals! Nice words of wisdom.. =)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Demmi
Demmi

Toronto, Canada



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