Pilgrim (January)

Pilgrim (January)

A Poem by Desert Knave
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Thoughts on my inner-journey in 2024 so far

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Not quite halfway back
To halfway back
I'm closer to Jimbo
But still akimbo
Emotionally...
But I don't trust me
Not to let the dream die
In the wink of an eye
Not quite halfway back
To halfway back


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

© 2024 Desert Knave


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"Not quite halfway back
To halfway back"

What a heavy and thoughtful line. That feeling of not knowing whether you should turn back or continue because each journey seems difficult. Bravo :))

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind comment. ~Jim

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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