I'd Follow Your Advice (Were it Good)

I'd Follow Your Advice (Were it Good)

A Poem by Desert Knave
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I'd follow your advice if I could
But first you'd have to make it good


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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Yes you are 7 yrs when you say that but 19 yrs when you involve in sex youu are 24 yrs when you wanted kid 34 yrs when you and me kill. A long life time of 35 yrs. The human life.

Jessy Jacob.
Me too 45yrs died because I struggled 10 yrs to get body hug but I didn't get that also because I die if I touch him.


Is it??

Jessy Jacob
A new life started being daughter-in-law of binoy Jacob and sudha Stephen.

Startup.

Take care my love I know what you need i will giv exactly what you want.



Posted 2 Weeks Ago


LOL ah, and there's the rub. So much advice is just not worth it, is it? You have a knack for saying so much in so few words, Jim. I liked it. Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you. Yeah, kind of came to me in a snicker's time. ~Jim

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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