Star Child

 

I could break down

the complexes

see

through the walls

of serpentine and

indecision

Fear is an obstacle of Illusions

That blade

had seeped into your

lucid brain

Thin slices,

left your face a

mirror

of what was there

before.

 

Reviews

[M.Kilani]

fear is only a hallucination that hunts you while you go after your dreams.
nicely written

[Akshat♥]

sharp poem...it seems you go through it again & again....nice though...good work..thanks for sharing..

[Brad]

damn, that cut right to the heart of it...should have had this for my "personal reflect shuns" contest

[Matthews Reggie]

scary and appropriate words for the mood.....

[Omar Fendri]

PERFEEEEEECT ^^ breathtaking short piece from you
deep meaning and powerful
dark and fearful
beautifully written :)
i adore it :)

[Crinkle°]

brilliant, dear MoonFlower.

[Author Rucha Joshi]

dark and fearful, yet likeliable. Very nice attempt. I lied the vocabulary and poetry overall

[Coyote Poetry]

Fear leave us alone and wishing to have done more. I like the short poem. You made your point. We must fight to keep our balance and desire alive. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jonathan De Elvira]

wow,
this was awfully dark...
I never expected this from you...
bravo..

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I could see a fall from grace and a hero lifting the person back to their feet.
I enjoyed this poem. It made me feel like I was witnessing true concern and
empathy.