Stress

Isn't stress terrible? -_-

Stress

Feels like you can’t breathe

Stays in your stomach like a tight knot

He shouldn’t be there

But somehow he finds his way

He finds his way into your mind too

Stress seems to want to take over your body

Why does he find me?

Stress controls your inner emotions

He makes you want to cry

He makes you angry

He even makes you hate

Why won’t he leave me be?

Stress thinks he can tear me down

But, he doesn’t know I have the light

He doesn’t know that it’s so bright

When he does know,

It’s too late.

My stress has faded away.

Author's Note

I wrote this in like ten minutes. It was just how I was felling at the moment. So... reviews are welcome : )

Reviews

[~Dragon X]

Oooh I love how you made it sound like stress was actually a person. A horrible person, but a person neverthless! I have no criticism to offer.

But you know what would be kewl? If you talked about stress like a person but didn't mention who it was until the last line to shock people! O.o

Just a crazy, random suggestion. XD It is still perfect.

[Ice Girl]

Love it!

[Summer'sBreeze]

so can relate to this
awsome poem!

[Desiree S.]

@ Dragon
Hey, thanks for the kind review and I will definitely look into revising.
Thanks for the suggestion!

Desiree :D