The Unspoken Secret

I had given up on all of my reality

Because I hear so much judgement

And I walk this world blindly

Because everything good seems to be absent.

 

When I fake a smile, does not seem right

With all the lies and broken promises

I just wish I had something real to hold on tight.

 

(Pr-Chorus)

 

Why do lies linger within the air

And why judgement becomes our sin

We all cannot help but to despair

We shouldn't let our greed win.

 

(Chorus)

I don't want people to see me

Because their words are so selfishly

I know if I show my reality

They will just beat me down

And I wish I could tell you my secrets

To show you who I am.

 

My heart grows weak

With each day that goes by

I don't want to hear those harsh words to speak

Because they make another soul die.

 

Even though I know I cannot be broken

I cannot unmask my true self

Because the world seems to grow darken

With all the wars that had fallen, made the world deaf

From the cry of the innocence cry.

 

(Pre-chorus and Chorus)

 

Let me whisper my secret

And show me you can understand

That even though I am not like you

You can accept how I am.

 

(chorus 2)

So let me show you what you missing

Let me teach you what is hidden

Let go all your greed and selfish needs

And set your mind free

Hold on to me and you will see

A world you never knew,

And I will show you who I am.

 

So let me show you who I am

I want to show who I am.

I want to show...

...who I am.

Reviews

[Arsh]

You've written this peaceful piece with the joy of time. When I was reading this song, I knew that you've plucked up the patience, honesty & the reality off your heart. Extremely enjoyable! So, yea... I may say, you're all 'bout talent. Excellent.

Ps. I enjoy every line of your song. You send a very deep mail to the world to give up their selfishness cause, it's all what keeps 'em away of their destiny--A destiny of love. Wonderful art!

[Mika =^-^=]

Thank you so much

[Arsh]

Anytime ;)

[Chris]

I wonder of the music that played in your mind to these lyrics...

[Mika =^-^=]

I have it in my head but is hard to express it right now.

[Chris]

I can appreciate that... is sometimes like trying to describe a color to someone that hasn't seen it.

[Mika =^-^=]

yes, exactly.

[DoormanDan]

This is a wonderful song you've written. I have a feeling that many people could probably relate to this(especially in high school). Sadly, many people are afraid to be themselves just because of what they think others will think of them. You are a great writer!

[Mika =^-^=]

Thank you. I write everything from my heart and how I feel at the moment. I was never afraid to show myself but there's more to it things that I hide..