Sequoias [2]

refurbished poem for LOGOS

 Remember when you took me to see the Sequoias,

And when you told me you could tell how old it was

By counting the myriad of spirals twining through its heart,

You said our love would live that long—never would we part.

You said our love would put the ancient Sequoias to shame

Like the mighty redwood it would grow wild and never tame.

We stood at opposite ends and stretched our arms around

Until our hands clasped and we were once again love bound.

 

Time has passed; the Sequoias continue to grow tall and free.

But all I can think of is how we might as well plant our own tree

In the space growing between us, isolating you from me.

Author's Note

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