Nobody listens.

Nobody listens.

A Poem by DestineyRae
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I'm lost in life right now as I have been many times. I'm at that crossroad again, that I hate.

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Nobody listens.
I'm silent, sitting still, waiting. 
Hesitating to make my next move,
what's left to prove?
Where to go and what path to choose?
One in which is familiar,
It's filled with lies, years of sweat, blood and tears.
bruises and broken bones,
scars and thrown stones......
Or do I choose the path unknown? 
It's the only one that's ever given me room to grow.
Sometimes I am lost, lonely, and cold. 
It has its treasures, adventures and stories to unfold. 
It's obvious which path to choose.
Only with what I know can I lose..

© 2015 DestineyRae


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Powerful and potent words, describing perfectly the crossroads of life, with the past behind you and the future ahead. The road to the future will put the most distance between you and your past, but would be seen by the obvious one to take. Doubt lies left and right of you, and with doubt comes confusion. You never want to go back, so that leaves you three choices. Remember that, no matter what position you find yourself in, you always have those three choices.
Very well written, with the negativity of the past and the positivity of the future flowing through it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 5, 2015
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Tags: divorce, relationships, breakups, paths, life, choices, abuse, domestic violence, crossroads

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DestineyRae
DestineyRae

Salt Lake, UT



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I have been writing poems since I was a child. It was my escape, but tends to put me in dark places, or make others assume I am in dark places. It just brings out the pain to my past. I am a mom of 3 .. more..