Sleepy Moon

Walking everyday to work and reading on that secluded seat, is more than a coffee in a raging day. =)

Walking early each morning to be mesmerized...

By the stillness of the city and the vastness of the sky. 

Where darkness smiles as it befriended the trees -

As the birds sings in tune with such monotonous chirps. 

Trudging on... until that solitude is found - 

Never ending, even so, addicting...

What a space to be, to soar endlessly... 

As the sleepy moon is clueless, to what I am about see... 

Reviews

[Relic]

I like the ending here. You made it seem like the moon is lazy in a way. Not as productive, yet not as lucky either.

The third and fourth lines may need some work. If you're interested I'll tell you. If not, no biggie.

Nice poem.

[Devinked7115]

Tell me please. I would appreciate it. =)

[Relic]

I believe I may have been referring to the tense. This is the way I hear it.

I walk early each morning to be mesmerized...
By the stillness of the city and the vastness of the sky.
Where darkness smiles as it befriends the trees -
As the birds sing in tune with such monotonous chirps.

I trudge on... until solitude is found -
Never ending, even so, addicting...
What a space to be, to soar endlessly...
As the sleepy moon is clueless, to what I am about see...