Eclipsed

something

I look into your eyes

I ask

Are they eclipsed?

They look half closed

I ask

Are they alive?

Can they see

My intentions,

My expectations?

Do you see

My hopes and dreams

My goals and missions?

Will you realize

All my acheivements

All my little victorys?

I look into your eyes

I ask

Why are they eclipsed?

Reviews

[Elizabeth]

I like the way this works as two pieces, as well.

[Dr.Who.LOVER]

I lovee the flow of this.