Eclipsed

Eclipsed

A Poem by Dexter Killian
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I look into your eyes

I ask

Are they eclipsed?

They look half closed

I ask

Are they alive?

Can they see

My intentions,

My expectations?

Do you see

My hopes and dreams

My goals and missions?

Will you realize

All my acheivements

All my little victorys?

I look into your eyes

I ask

Why are they eclipsed?

© 2011 Dexter Killian


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I like the way this works as two pieces, as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I lovee the flow of this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Dexter Killian
Dexter Killian

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