Let Go

written in 2010

At last, this long life
has brought us together.
The world
only had to
come to a closing
for our eyes to meet.
So here we lay,
our eyes gaze upon one another.
Earth is collapsing
beneath us.
All we can do is
close our eyes
and lay together.
So take my hand.
Close your eyes.
& Let go.

Reviews

[Elinor Williams]

Very sweet, almost echoing "Until death do us part" :') great poem!

[Angel Bella]

Let go of your self with me ? or let go of life? mmmm this made me think and I liked it too.