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A Story by Dion [MFMDM]

It's raining on a concrete sidewalk
This side walk is full of cracks , mainly due to the weather it has endured
In these cracks grow many weeds.
These weeds roots are overshadowing many seeds that lie beneath the cracks of the sidewalk
Soaking up the rain that helps produce the growth of these seeds enclosed with feelings of their own nature
People pass this sidewalk everyday OBLIVIOUS to this happening

One day a man walk in this rain & notices these meaningless weeds .
He pulls up the weeds and throws them to the side as they cringe for soil and respiration

Days pass as this man walks over the sidewalk feeling good about what he's done .

Months pass as he notices the growth of many beautiful flowers throughout these cracks
& overtime the flowers bloomed entirely over the concrete

I lost the special feel to this since it started to seem cliche or similar to Tupac Shakur's " rose from the concrete "

© 2015 Dion [MFMDM]


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Added on May 8, 2015
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Dion [MFMDM]
Dion [MFMDM]

Las Vegas , NV



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