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Got off work early

Gerbil shat on my shoulder

What and awkward day

Author's Note

sorry if i miscounted

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

You've got to go when you've got to go...no politeness in nature. LOL

[Annabelle Lee]

haha. thanks

[Nia Hope]

Lol well that's different sorry that happened :)

[Annabelle Lee]

haha thanks

[Simon Welsh]

Oh dear, aha x) I hate it when that happens.

[Annabelle Lee]

Ha, thank you

[ANTO]

I was sitting going with my internal meter - dum, dum , dum , dum , dum and so on. Its a senryu Annabelle and its funny - aww the poor gerbil ;)

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[Annabelle Lee]

the poor gerbil? howsabout me? lol

[ANTO]

You wouldn't fit on the gerbils shoulder...?? ;)
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[Joshua Hunter]

Hahaha, this makes me laugh! Great job, 5-7-5. Just one question in the last line do you want it to be "and" or "an"? Other than that great job! Loved it!

[Annabelle Lee]

whoops, typo haha.

[Baby Ricochet]

Damn gerbils. I counted 5 7 5. Good Senryu.

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you!