After and After

Watching is seeing

As seeing is watching

Though I walk in this life

In this body

It feel's as if I watch on the side

Seeing myself as I go

 

Year after year

Day after day

Minute by minute

Walking the path made for me

Maybe someday there see

 

For year after year'

Day after day

Minute by minute

What they see

This life, this body

Is not the true me.

Reviews

[Sarah]

I loved the repetition in this piece, it made it such a joy to read. :) I can relate as well, the feeling as though you're merely watching your life instead of living it. Yet another great poem! :)