The Cliche of Love

The Cliche of Love

A Poem by Cat
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LOVE

Is not a player's game

LOVE

Is for those who enjoy pain

LOVE

Is not for imaginary lovers

LOVE

Is something everyone wants

LOVE

Is something only the lucky can have

LOVE

Something only the blessed receive

LOVE

The simple thing that moves us all

LOVE

The only thing to stop us dead in our tracks

LOVE

The one thing I crave

LOVE

The one thing I am incapable of

LOVE

Most only see it in the movies

LOVE

If you have it hold it and never let go

LOVE

and good thoughts to you all

© 2013 Cat


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i like the format of this! my one critique is that the line "most only see it in the movies" seems a little out of place. it might work better earlier in the poem, but I honestly don't think you need it at all. other than that good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I think you make a great point note that you point out out I see what you mean.. read more

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Cat

Some Po-Dunk Town, IN



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*BE A BEAUTIFUL CREATURE* Hi guys! My name is Cat. I beleuve in equality for all. But, most importantly, I am a writer. I write mostly poetry, but I am also working on a verse novel. Ellen Hopkin.. more..

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