Your eyes

sometimes people hide their true feelings, but they forget other things give them away.

I wrote a whole novel based off of the expression on your face

lined with crevices and secrets too deep to explore

your brow gave mention of the lack of work you chose to do.

And a familiar wrinkle on the side of your face revealed crazed sarcasms.

The distinct two second jump above your right eye displayed neuro- imbalance...

And your lips, fixed to separate the wild horses from the flower bed.

Oh but your eyes said it all, nothing showed me more than your eyes.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Marcy Chavez]

"I wrote a novel based off of the expression of your face" I think this says it all, how someone's expression can tell everything about that persons mood or feelings without the need of a single word. I like this.

[Dy]

Lovely write. Very true. People try to hide emotions but their face tells it all. Great job!