Hello Sailor!

Hello Sailor!

A Poem by Donna Lorenz
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I like the cut of your jib!

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Hello Sailor!

I like the cut of your Jib!

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From fore topmast head to the Jib boom

My triangular sail does blow!

Before the lovely's board your ship

A sailing I too go!

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My ship is rather rusty

Barnacles do line her crusty hull,

But boy can she travel,

Keep up with you quite well!

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My hull is full of baggage

Tried to throw it overboard

But someone brought it back to me

So in the hull it is stored.

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My props a little rusty,

Know I can fix things up.

Just put all your money

In this handy little cup.

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The Tiller is my mainstay,

Have cared for it so well.

Put olive oil on it just last week

And now it’s running swell!

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My portholes are no longer shining.

The world looks so dark and dim.

I wonder if I washed them

Would it bring some sunlight in?

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The Starboard light is broken

I turned the Port light so it glows.

Don’t have a sense of humor,

As everybody knows!

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Nice you are so poetic,

Words streaming from your Lips.

Best be very careful

Lest on your gangplank lovely's slip.

 

DL

 

 

© 2011 Donna Lorenz


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A sailing I too go!

I love the poem it's fun I can see it hanging on a wall near the ocean...This one line ?? I'm not an expert...ex=unknown + pert=drip = unknown drip = me :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Donna Lorenz
Donna Lorenz

Pumpkin Center, CA



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I have been in CA here for years and do love it. I also have been in much of the United States and surrounding countries and to Europe twice. I Enjoy learning about people and love to travel. Poetr.. more..

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