I Hate This

I Hate This

A Poem by DoritoBag
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Just my feelings

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So broken
Heart stolen
Don't know where the f**k I'm goin
So much pain just keeps flowin
No more emotions are showin
Just today
Just one night
Want to know how it feels to see no light
Am I hopeless ?
Am i alright ?
I always lose every f*****g battle I fight
The end

© 2017 DoritoBag


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This is so deep. I also like that even though it's a poem it's almost straight to the point. Keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on December 14, 2017
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Tags: Depression

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DoritoBag
DoritoBag

Las Vegas, NV