Seasons of haiku

A Poem by Dory

The warm red gold light

draws long shadows on the earth

enveloping all

Tendrils of ice

Creeping slowly all around

A blanket of cold

Buds bursting open

Fresh, green, life everywhere

The world is reborn

Growth, warmth and harsh light

Sun in a cloudless blue sky

Lazy, hazy heat

Author's Note

First attempt at Haiku. I'm not sure how to punctuate it, any advice?

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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
Tags: Haiku, seasons, first attempt

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