Hallows Eve

Hallows Eve

 

Crimson colors, deadfall mind

Scarecrow chilling, eery time.

Bats fly, shrill in thought

Death brings silence, coffin bought.

Ore’ Hallows eve, carve jack-o-lantern

Lollipop, gumdrops, sugar banter.

Tis' all a trick, masquerade the eyes.

Softly choking, what lies, doeth dies.

Oooh’ Hallows Eve,

Come creep thee skies.

Author's Note

Written for a contest utilizing 10 words: Crimson, deadfall, Scarecrow, Chilling, eery, bats, shrill, coffin, jack-o-lantern, lollipop.

Fun writing!

As always comments and criticism are welcome!

Reviews

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Drama Child

I find this writing very creative and witty, but the flow is what takes the prize.

[Drama Child]

Thank you very much!! I appreciate your kind words!

[Tim]

I could never put together pre-chosen words like that. Great writing.

[Drama Child]

Thank You for your kind words! Much appreciated!

[Esther]

Love this :) makes me think of Halloween

[Drama Child]

Thank You Woya!!

[aLittlePain]

Beautifully consistent and a stellar use of the words. This imparts a spookiness that's incredibly fun.
Nice job. R xo

[Drama Child]

Very much appreciated! Thank You!

[Coyote Song]

A very spooky and darkly fun Halloween poem. Fantastic use of the words. Congratulations to you!!!

[Drama Child]

Thank You kindly! :)

[Coyote Song]

You're welcome.

[Hebe]

Very clever use of the 10 words, everything just fits perfectly ....
Congratulations !

[Drama Child]

Thank You So Much! Very appreciated!

[MYRETOUN]

I like this - it is so spooky
Rhymes natural and not forced
You achieve much with limited word choice
Write on my friend

[Drama Child]

Thank you so much! Such kind words! Very appreciated!

[Wicahpi]

Fun writing, indeed! All 10 words were used with visual imagery and I felt like I seen it all. Nice rhymes, not seemingly forced. Well done. Thank you for entering this round of 10 Words I Give contest! Good Luck x

[Drama Child]

Thank you and I love contests like this.. :)

[Wicahpi]

I am glad you enjoyed writing for this contest. I enjoy hosting it! I look forward to the entries.