Before Blue Was a Color

Before Blue Was a Color

A Poem by Cerebriation
"

AP A Silverstein-esque attempt at breaking a long bout of writer's block

"
Blue is only a color, whatever 
Whatever colors our seas and skies
But this hue has not been in our spectrum forever 
Nor has it colored our eyes 
It must have been dreary outside back then
And what a sad set of iris to see
What, with no blues, did we sing in our music
And how great could poetry be
Oh, them folks knew not just what magic they missed 
And oh how thankful I am that we won't 
I can't imagine a world where blue don't exist 
And how blue I will be if someday it don't

© 2016 Cerebriation


Author's Note

Cerebriation
11/2016

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

A nice re-working of this one C.I.
It does make the reader think and ponder on the nature of perception and the perception of nature.
Good rhyming scheme - just one slight hiccup at 'music'.
Overall a cool idea and execution.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hello, Justin! :)
This flows nicely. Good luck breaking the block.

Posted 7 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

144 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 19, 2016
Last Updated on December 10, 2016

Author

Cerebriation
Cerebriation

Aiken, SC



About
My name is Justin. I'm an Instrument/Electrical Technician, IT Professional, singer, writer, artist, and whatever else you want to call me. I write what I feel and sometimes it feels me. My life ha.. more..

Writing