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When I go outside

When I go outside

A Poem by Aly Jones
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Another poem by my friend, Rebecca.

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When I go outside I smell the clean pretty grass.

 

When I go outside I feel the wind in my hair.

 

When I go outside I can smell nature.

 

When I go outside I feel the bright sun light in my face.

 

When I go outside I smell the flowers.

 

When I step out that door I step into nature

© 2011 Aly Jones


Author's Note

Aly Jones
Another poem by my dearest poet friend, Rebecca.

I have permission to post this by Rebecca.

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Really good poem! Great visual!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nature can up lift a soul in so many ways!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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lovely work, Rebecca! :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Simple but attention catcher. Great job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This does make me long for the outdoors! Rather I must be confined to a stuffy old classroom. I really like this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Really good Rebecca and Aly! This is wonderful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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When you feel so down and can't talk to anyone.. just sink into the beauty of nature.. and everything will be just fine :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nature is a beautiful place where we can experience the delights it can give us on such day. When we go outside, its another step for a new journey.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Simple, straightforward and wonderfully atmospheric. Wonderful natural poem. Great write

Posted 7 Years Ago


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