I Hope That You Are Having the Time of Your Life

If you ever feel guilty,

just remember that my heart

has been trapped in the quietest,

most desolate world

ever since you

left

&

let that make you feel worse,

because no matter

how sorry you are

or how much sleep

you are losing,

you will never

lose as much

as I have.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"been trapped in the quietest,
most desolate world
ever since you
left"

Sad and painful... Thank you for sharing...:).......................

[Lauren]

Thank you.. I'm glad you took the time to review. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Konigin]

This poem rocks. I can relate all too well. I felt the sorrow and the anger here. Wonderful pen Lovelace! :)

[Lauren]

Thank you loveee!

[Konigin]

Anytime Sis! :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a powerful write, there's so much pain in this beautiful write. Brilliantly penned.

Kaze~ :-)

[Lauren]

Thank you very much

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your most welcome. :-)

[Stephen]

~~Painful~~ Well expressed your emotions via words!

[Lauren]

Thanks so much!