The Course Without The Man

I look at this man

He seems without a plan

Walking down a deserted street

Where no one dared to keep his feet

Walking without a course

Had no interest or force

Wondered why he stepped in there

Was he lost or was he dreaming wide awake

The man seemed like a ghost or spirit

Who looked like he had no merit

Just walking soundly and aimlessly

Imagining his dreams which I found very unworthy

But still I write this poem

Without drinking any rum

Because I am that man

Who has no plan

Author's Note

This poem can get weird by the minute. So please give frank opinions about the poem. Thank You

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

I was once told plans were made to be broken, if you have no plans nothing ever gets broken. Besides isn't life suppose to be spontaneous and enjoyed in the moment, no plans, no expectation, no disappointment, just think the joy life would bring! I think that is a good plan I will stick with the plan of no plans!

[Jeff]

Plans are hard to keep going. and horrible when everything falls through.

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. uhm ... not sure if there and awake rhyme ... or ... poem and rum ... but this is a good poem ... sometimes a non-plan is as good plan as any other ... :) ...