Tell Me Your Fears

I hope it scares you.

If you never believed in nightmares

Then today I am going to make you

Just run like petrified hares

Otherwise all your fears will turn true

You wouldn't want to see that

Be a part of your fears like that

Just step in this rat trap

And then, that's a wrap

Run when you got time

Forget all your dimes

Just run like the wind

But did you see in between the wind?

Slow down now

Its all over

Just don't turn around now

And the thought of returning back should be never.

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

Fear, something we all perceive, something we all want to ignore but something which sits on our mind firmly once it sets in. I don't completely agree with your message in the poem. I would say that we should never run from our fears but rather face it. and that is the only way to overcome it. I may have completely misunderstood u though

[Jeff]

Fear is a powerful motivator and can be even worse for keeping people down.

[Loner]

Nice work.

[MuSe Ampoule]

I imagine some dark being in a dark corner and a damsel cowering waiting for the final blow. Good write!

[Shashank]

fears.... who haven't experienced it?? its just that we need a trusted soul to reveal it.. and it has been beautifully portrayed in the poem.. well done dushyant.. keep it up..

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i like this, it has a rythm to it. it could definitly be a song if you wrote music to it. nice job! keep writing!