Mad World

Mad World

A Poem by Dushyant Thadani
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Please don't ever forget to love everyone, even if you become rich and famous, and your friend becomes a pauper.

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This is a mad mad world
Which we live in
It is we who engineered this world
We didn't realize it

People just keep getting Bigger
Leaving the smaller ones behind
The difference keeps getting larger
And the smaller ones wish it could go on rewind

Classmates forget each other
Once they become big and famous
And once the other is a mere pauper
Who keep crying for alms from us

We back-stab people
Like Brutus did to Caesar
Which makes the pain double
And makes the world go hither-tither

This world is leading to its end
It becomes too late
When we think of making amends
And now its time to change before its too late

© 2010 Dushyant Thadani


Author's Note

Dushyant Thadani
I just thought to pen this down, and I am sure there are many many errors. If you can, please understand this poem's message.

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This definitely touches on the truth of today's world.
"People just keep getting Bigger
Leaving the smaller ones behind...
Classmates forget each other
Once they become big and famous"

Even without being famous, once people get grow older it's nearly impossible to maintain old relationships.

Very expressive! Well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Your chose of topics is a good one..I enjoyed reading it this morn..Thanks for stopping by my work and commenting..It is greatly appreciated..Sunflower

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I did understand your sincere feelings in this poem of yours. A lovely message again which u have shared with us , thanks for sharing with us.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A lot of truth in this piece. All relationships need work and as the years go by, friendships sometimes fall by the wayside due to life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very cool, definitely shows how hard it is to keep old relationships.
i like it a lot man, keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i totally understand this, i am glad you wrote about this subject and posted, it needed to be said for sure. nice work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This definitely touches on the truth of today's world.
"People just keep getting Bigger
Leaving the smaller ones behind...
Classmates forget each other
Once they become big and famous"

Even without being famous, once people get grow older it's nearly impossible to maintain old relationships.

Very expressive! Well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful! many people can't help forgetting but I believe that certain people can make such a big impression that even know you may never see them again they will never be forgotten

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dushyant Thadani
Dushyant Thadani

Dubai, United Arab Emirates, United Arab Emirates



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Just a simple homo sapien, who loves to be away from normal, free from norms and try to start a new era through writing. Hope this isn't a dream, and I hope I am capable enough to achieve what I hope .. more..

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