A Perfect Night.

Boundaries have fallen underneath our eyes.
Our fingers are locked into each others.
This is the moment we've been waiting for.
We've taken temptation into our own hands.
Kissing, caressing, indulge.
Is this really what you wanted?
Caught it up in the action,
An interesting reaction.
Baby, don't let this end tonight.
I've got a feeling inside me,
I don't want to let it go.
Stay with me tonight,
We can keep this feeling alive.
I surrendered myself to you,
And you surrendered yourself to me.
You're like an addicting drug.
Once I've had you,
I can never get enough.
Oh, darling.
I'm addicted to your every whim.
Without you,
I'm on edge.
Give me one more kiss,
To get me by for the night.

Reviews

[KAREN]

Romantic and beautiful and nice flow!

[Anicca]

Lovely. Filled with emotion and imagery, it's nice to read a poem celebrating love. Great write.

[KatiePie]

Simple and lovely in it's simplicity. I enjoyed reading this, it painted a picture in my head. Great imagery. Great write.