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Love is a Funny Thing

Love is a Funny Thing

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written in 8th grade.

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I'll always love you

But I'm not in love with you

Anymore, at last.

© 2009 Breezie Kae




Reviews

this is wonderfully tricky, everything you can give him is this longlasting loving him. aww very nice. thy for entering my contest. wishing you luck !

lara

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was good, in more than a single way, first of it was well written. And style selection is important so it is cool that you chose haiku to write this poem, in which you are saying what you've wanted to for years. it's cool. keep it up.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If love comes and goes that quickly, its not real. Someday, you will know what it is, and then get ready to give up control of your emotions, because all of a sudden someone else will have power over you.

Norma

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is anyones thingage does not count, life goes onbut pain is still there.It bugs me when people say "kids" can't fall in love when they sure as heck can. I like this poem because more often than not you aren't in LOVe with a person but you need them, so you'll awys admire them because of your need until (as your final lines say): "But I'm not in love with you Anymore, at last." Very creative^^

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes you are bored but,
you're too young to fall in love
just live life instead


;D

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 9, 2008
Last Updated on September 13, 2009


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