Poetic Metaphor

Written in 8th grade. (Perhaps summer after?)

True beauty

is just a poetic metaphor,

but oh how true

a poem can be.

Now I see

that nothing

is really as it seems.

Reviews

[Chaos Complex]

Simple, yet thought provoking. Loved it.

[Trix]

I really like this. I liked it more because I was pulled to read it more than once, to really see the 2 sentences and differing ideas. Such ingenuity.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

nothing is what it seems

[Bubo]

beautifully put and how right you are!!

True beauty
is just a poetic metaphor,

The wonderful thing about words is you can make them what you like................