Solitude

Solitude

A Poem by Breezie Kae
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Written in the 8th grade.

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Shadows of the past,

rejected and secluded

only in your mind.

© 2010 Breezie Kae


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This haiku made me realize something about Haiku: in Japanese tradition, they were generally about "mother" nature and followed an idea-pattern per line (I never remember the specifics), but American Haiku are usually about inner or human nature. Maybe. Often.

Anyway, you really managed to pack a lot of meaning into it. I'm seriously impressed.

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Very well done!!

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it's funny how little can tell illuminate so much about a poem. Your poem's title is what drew me first to it. It first did sound like someone wanted allude to a phallic idea and yet a beauitful haiku was written and flowered a nice and simple haiku and didn't even hit near cliche and showed so much without giving anything up. Keep up the good work, and I'm eager to read more and more of your work.

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can't find the words to say to this. It's amazing.

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1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Shadows of my past
Always bring me sad and down
I need to smoke weed

:D

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful and evocative. You certainly packed a lot of meaning into so few words. This is really a well done haiku.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This haiku made me realize something about Haiku: in Japanese tradition, they were generally about "mother" nature and followed an idea-pattern per line (I never remember the specifics), but American Haiku are usually about inner or human nature. Maybe. Often.

Anyway, you really managed to pack a lot of meaning into it. I'm seriously impressed.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

this is so embracing of the lurk of your inner deamons; me loves it, :D

---mishel

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Posted 12 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

great job.... love it

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1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Hey Breezie, I enjoyed this, it tells me that at times when we look at something, it will give meaning to only us, as we feel it. Great job
Tony

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Posted 12 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

I just don't have much to say, except that this is a really beautiful and well-written haiku!Great job!

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3 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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