Why?

Why?

A Poem by Dinkleman
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A free verse. Not my favorite work, but I thought I'd put it on here anyways.

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The trees are dead and cold.

Winter has come.

Moonlight shining gray.

Like my heart.

My love was never enough.

I’ll just go.

Why won’t you let me into your broken heart.

And why would you give it to him.

I’ll waste away.

How can I forgive someone, but not myself.

© 2011 Dinkleman


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The poem is not good enough, i cannot really understand the sense
sorry

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whoops.. Didn't catch that! Thanks!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Did you mean 'The trees ARE dead...?'

It's hard to let go and worse to feel unworthy of someone's love. Deeply profound.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the last line.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 7, 2011
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My name is Dustyn and I have always enjoyed writing and reading stories and poems. I tend to be drawn to the more dark natured stories, regardless, I still enjoy ideas from all types of backgrounds. .. more..

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