SWEETHEART

 

SWEETHEART

 

Your eyes are pools of misery

your heart is pure gold

I wish that You could feel my warmth

`fore I got so dog gone old

 

Yur just the sweetest  woman

That I have ever known

Remind me of my old horse

Before I was fully grown

 

Come lay yur tender body next to mine

An tell me that you love me one more time

For the good times Sweethearrt

Whoever you are

 

----  John

Reviews

[JLe]

This is lovely, thanks for sharing!

[Heidi-Anne]

Beautiful sentiment.

[Corset]

lol @ Barney Fife, loved that guy, just when you've got love all figured out, it throws you a curve ball, "Beats all Andy, just beats all"

[poetforlife]

Love it!!

[green dreams]

Very romantic.

[felioness]

Awesome...I love dialects!

[Kenneth The Poet]

The man who can write excellence with a Western Twang.

[Jetta Zippora]

Very sweet. Beautiful write, friend.

[Heather]

age does not mean desire leaves eh? I read it aloud in my best old man voice and enjoyed the crooked smile on my face as I thought of this old man just hoping to get some tail. :)

[Emily Rae]

nostalgic and warming-- you seem to write of times past, of times that were never had, and of times only fantasized about...beautiful with a hint of sadness