SUNSHINE

SUNSHINE

 

Let me count the rays

Shining from my Sunshine

She is a guiding beacon

The brightest of a lifetime

 

That`s her eyes on fire

Shooting light and sparks

And when she smiles

It warms me through

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

'Tis a sunshine to warm the soul of a man to help him endure the cold moments of any day.

May such a light always illuminate your pathway, and bid your heart to beat a bit faster as it bathes in such warmth! Ever embrace her smile!

A lovely sentiment!

[Deandra Dawn]

Short and simple...I like it

[Passion]

Short, sweet and straight from the heart. Very beautiful!

[Norma M Sutton]

Neat play on words. I like it.

[Leigh]

Whoever she is, she is truly loved. Great thoughts and ultimately so true. I enjoyed this poem very much

[Marie]

She must be beautiful in the way only sunshine can be beautiful.

[InkingPen]

What a wonderful sentiment, for a woman to elicit such a response in a man that he proclaim her radiance in such a manner.

[Renée]

Sweet !