In Accordance With Appalachia

A sporadic fog accumulates

across my line of sight,

as yet another emission

of frostbitten air bellows out

into a West Virginian sunset.

 

These weak Irish eyes catch glimpse

of Shenandoah etching

her way across the valley below,

while our hiking boots shift

through thawing snow,

creating a momentary impression.

Reviews

[Michael G.]

A good description of what the view is like from "up on the mountain."
I think the title fits well.
This is a good thought and has good flow to it.
Keep writing.