Under

Under

A Poem by E.K.Donaldson

A man under water, 
Can no longer saunter.
The dust is swept under the rug, 
As they shoo a bug.
To be swept under
and still hear the thunder
Won't anyone give a tug?
Will anyone feed the pug?
They don't do a thing.
All they want is bling.

© 2015 E.K.Donaldson


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Nice use of words. I had to read twice. I like the movement of thoughts leading to the nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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E.K.Donaldson

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I love writing all sorts of things. I am told that I am best at poetry. I am busy though, so I can't post much. I am also on Wattpad. However, most of the work I post here is there also. more..

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