Left in the Dark

Left in the Dark

A Poem by Eagergreen
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Coincidence between the name and the poem? Yes! I'm not that clever...

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Talking to you is like
writing with my left hand

it's immature despite my mind
it's shakey when you're here

Being with you is like
drawing with no light

I don't know what I'm doing
and I'm hoping it'll end up okay

© 2015 Eagergreen


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Eagergreen
Please comment don't leave me in the dark

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nice I like the use of the homophone left/left it really makes you unsure of what is going on is she merely left handed or is there something more, good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this, it's showing a real vulnerability.
Being nervous about someone, a love perhaps?
Enjoyed it. :)


Posted 9 Years Ago



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