Confessions of a love sick mind

I still have not gotten around a good description yet

Down on my knees
with my eyes to the hills
O  am filled with unease..as the wind parts the bushes and trees
with sound of music which the God's of nature has formed for you
I am ensnared by your charm and like a rabbit on the streets
I am frozen to my feet ...made drunk by your sweet essence and like the corn fields
I long for your rain to wash away the drought that has clogged my existence.

My throat aches from the endless nights that i cry....lying in wait for the night to pass
But daylight brings no delight...for i am tormented further by your absence...your fragrance ..fills my head like sweet wine ..filling and exciting.

To thee I owe my being...

I love thee so

Author's Note

Please feel free to shoot as many holes as possible...I live for critics/corrections