Give Me A Pen

Give Me A Pen

A Poem by Earthrise

Just a rant

Damn this path between my mind and my mouth.
It meanders for miles,
And the meaning melts in the milieu.

My communication comes only through its elimination.
Transcription sans interpretation.
Shall I describe to you my meaning?
Impart to you its feeling?
Give me a pen, then.
Witness the fruition of my meditation.

Desecration or revelation?
I care little for your own impression.
At least you finally understand me.

© 2022 Earthrise

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I enjoyed this write. I wonder sometimes if I truly write anything or it's all received by some universal telepathy inserted through my synapses and squeezed out in ink.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 Month Ago

I tend more toward the universal telepathy thing, myself. Like all spiritual or cosmic ideas, I'm no.. read more
like me or not, I write what I the Turtles sang "I am what I am and that's all I ever can be"

this is a very smart the " Transcription sans interpretation"
I think you impart a feeling with that we can gather for ourselves.
like what I write or least our writing introduces us.
thank you for this piece, Earthrise,

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 Months Ago

Thank you for your review, J. Your critiques always keep me going
Well if this isn't shooting straight, I don't know what is.
Loving the banterish style of writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago

Whoa, I like your attitude! My niece told me one time that I have no filter. Haha. I try to check it at times. To write what we are thinking is sometimes easier to get our point across than to verbally explain it. Sometime things do get lost in translation. I like this poem very much. Very straight forward. Nice work. Temp

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 Months Ago

Haha, thank you! Straightforward was the goal. It really is so much easier to write things than to s.. read more

3 Months Ago

Nice to meet you too! Temp

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4 Reviews
Added on June 28, 2022
Last Updated on June 28, 2022
Tags: poetry, poem, writer, rant



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