Alone in the bar

Alone in the bar

A Poem by EdFutinski

going alone to bar
i'm taking a cab
The driver tells me about his son
He's a jounalist
Friends forget
Friends disapear
I'm passing by;
people
They look strange
My face is pale
i'm not allowed to sleep
I see all the people togheter
I'm far away
Inside all is smoke and cheap drinks
Well
I rest upon and order 2 vodka's
One for my imaginary pal,
tonight's he's busy
So I guess
I'll drink alone
Cigarettes come and go
Taking a part of me I gave away with sincerity
Still is only me
I'll take 2 beers
And after 2 whiskeys
I'm having a good time
when
the maintenance guy
shows me the sign "no dance on the stairs"
Well,my friend,I'm just resting,siping
from my loneliness
He's not bothered
so I stay and enjoy
good music and cheap drinks
all around people think they're having good time
they make me feel special
So I'll go and have another vodka
I don't need no one,as no one needs me
as most are all just sacks of flesh
with a minimal emotion that
allows to laugh
one about another
i'll take 2 drinks
my only friend

© 2008 EdFutinski


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This is a pretty cool write. What an evening.

Posted 17 Years Ago



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EdFutinski
EdFutinski

Hellville, Romania



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A Poem by EdFutinski