Let Us Dance

Something that I've been feeling lately, so it was written quickly. Though it is a little more erotic feeling, there is no sexual context. Its all sensation

Let Us Dance

I feel it tonight, that overwhelming need

To feel a body close, to hear her breathe

The gentle movements, the rise of her chest

As we begin to dance.

My hand touches yours, our fingers entwine

The small of your back, the curve of your hip

Such a delicious sensation, I need more!

The distance between us disappears.

The music of your heart, feel it within

Its raw beat grows, full of desire

My lips find your neck, hear your murmur

I growl in my hunger.

I restrain the animal, call myself to heel

Gentle lips seek yours, move closer still

Eager hands with a hunger of her own

She smiles as I growl again.

I have to keep control, selfish hunger unthinking

No care is its need, no love in its desire

The monster I keep, chained and locked

I am better then the rest!

Her lips tease my ear, her growl rumbles

Calls to me, pushes me, feeds me

Her fingers bite, grip is wild

Release the animal, let loose!

Sweat beads on my forehead, I close my eyes

I'm loosing control of the hunger within

Her teeth bite my shoulder, her eyes are fierce

Then her lips break my will, shatter my control

She growls “Let Us Dance.”

Author's Note

Still unsure of whether or not this should be for a mature audience. Opinions?

Reviews

[PearlPoet]

looks like this was a dance to remember! I love the energy and raw passion that you have displayed through out the poem. I don't think this write is too "reviling" You dont have to move it to mature audience

[Cryingkate]

hugh? How did I find this first LOL....Let me get my breath........

[Solitary Traveler]

You're killing me Kate! What did you think?

[Cryingkate]

I ain't thinking... I'm still breathing and wondering how did I get here first? I haven't got back her in a while and all of a sudden like a jolt I remembered and came here fast and there you lay.... ready LOL

[Cryingkate]

My mate will be impressed at my intuition skills on this one LOL he knows when I get em I get em strong and clear ::LOL

[Cryingkate]

I can't tell you what I think Until I read it 5 more times...........