I don't like this

A Poem by Effector Prime

When you know things are coming down already even as you phrase the next thing to say.

Fools gold

I like it when you ask me to turn the volume up

I like it when you ask me if I like it

I like it when you ask me when I smile

What's up

Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah

Between sunset and sunrise

Then slept, four chambers

Some of them squeezed shut

To accommodate your splendor

You never miss anything.. :D

For I dread it happening

Well, for you never miss anything

© 2016 Effector Prime

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Coyote Poetry

I liked this poem a lot.
"Dally with transcending laden vapour yeah
Between sunset and sunrise
Then slept, four chambers
Some of them squeezed shut
To accommodate your splendor
You never miss anything"
The above lines. Solid and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago

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6 Years Ago

To read such words from the Coyote himself... I am still digesting and processing the nutrition from.. read more

6 Years Ago

A amazing poem my friend and better to dodge death. Death comes when death wants.

6 Years Ago

Aye indeed. For that reason I will hold still, I will live.

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DIVYA

For I dread it happening
Well, for you never miss anything

We get so besotted with some people we give them all our controls. Then we dread it happening but it happens anyway. A very deep and thoughtful write.