I cant hear you

I cant hear you

A Poem by Effector Prime
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I couldn't hear her clearly so couldn't be sure if she was feeling the same way.. In the end it turned out we both loved each other. We're together.. I'm so fond of this nostalgia..

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There has been so much left unsaid
So much that i wont last another moment
in this silence
But when it comes to that second

I lose my soul and my vision
My mind goes sore and its swollen

and I tell you

I just cant live without you
No I can't live without you
Find me a reason to be away from you
I cant see without you

I'v been thinking of you so much today
Going over and over the things 
i wanted so much to say
I hear the phone bring your gentle spirit
and blow away my thoughts and words with it

I lose my soul and my vision
My mind goes sore and its swollen

and I tell you..

I just cant live without you
No I can't live without you
Find me a reason to be away from you
I cant see without you

I lose my soul and my vision
My mind goes sore and its swollen

CZ I CANT HEAR YOU!!!!
CZ I CANT HEAR YOU!!!!

© 2011 Effector Prime


Author's Note

Effector Prime
It's a soft "acoustic-guitar" song my friends, with a mournful-heavy ending. Let me know what you think!

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the song, recurring signals, sewage embroiled, desolate wasteland
the girl, long forgotten, far behind BAHA! call me meak call me crazy

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautiful write. I would be interested in hearing this. Great lyric.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

10 Years Ago

thanks very much my friend! :)

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Effector Prime
Effector Prime

Glasgow, Theta-Religion, United Kingdom



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