Morning

Morning

Morning dawn creeps in
Opening up a new day
Revealing her beauty slowly
Naively entering without fear 
In between night and day
Naturally and without hesitation 
Graciously she arrives 

Author's Note

Just playing around with feelings ... Feedback welcome !

Reviews

[Sagar Waingankar]

Beautiful illustration! Thanks for sharing!

[Lisa Ring]

I love to do the same! Very pretty. You express yourself in a way that seems innocent and pure. My opinion is that "in between night and day" interrupts the rhythm a little, but maybe it's just me. Great job.

[EileenMarie]

Thank you.. I guess the innocent & pure comes from life or people beating me down but I still hold out that there are good people out there :)

[FJ Davis]

Most likely, reflective of your own optimism and hopefulness, EM.
A lovely poem about morning that joyously exalts its arrival; one leaving the reader feeling good.
Give us more!

[EileenMarie]

I fight morning anxiety daily. Writing about it helps but using other tools to express a more positive outlook is my ultimate goal.. Thanks do much for reading & reviewing I'm so glad you liked it!