Too Tired to Finish

Too Tired to Finish

A Poem by Eldee
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Ramblings of a sleep deprived maniac.

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I feel overwhelmed.
Numb- but not.
This tingling- it climbs.
Ticklish, and off.

Unfortunately, I feel-
Too tired-
To move.
To shake some life into
This tired corpse, blue.

Its 4:40 at night.
Or in the morning, a’right.
I’m rhyming in attempt
But failing on site.

My words don’t make sense.
As you see them run.

Fox will jump.
Um- or not.
It’s the stupid sentence that comes with PC fonts.

But there’s no point in sleeping
In snoozing-
In- oof.

Well, I’m too tired to finish
So goodnight to

© 2008 Eldee


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This was cute, I almost felt sedated and sleepy-face reading it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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"Fox will jump.
Um- or not.
It's the stupid sentence that comes with PC fonts."

I actually know what you're talking about! XD
Well, I liked this write; very unique! ;]

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep sleep is the biggest b***h of them all but it has to be done. Well worded.

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Eldee
Eldee

Southlake, TX



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NAME: Eldee, LD, Little Dragon, Eldearie BDAY: August 5th, 1992 Ah, what is there to say about little old me? I am 18 years of age, female, and an aspiring writer. Currently I am attending U.. more..

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