Run out

It seems I have run out.

No energy is left

Nothing left to run or shout

Nothing to do my best

Nothing to make me think

'what am I doing here'

Just stuck on the brink

between nothing and of fear

What is left is an empty shell

Barely able to move

It's basically a living hell

But there's nothing to left to proove

Author's Note

What do you think this means? What does it mean to you?

Reviews

[Zaliodir]

This is how I feel about my writing and creativity in general right now. All I can seem to muster are lackluster poems that lack depth and meaning beyond the surface. My creativity is stuck in a melancholy cage with no way out. When you are at rock bottom, there really is nothing left to prove to anyone. It's just you and your pity, or hate or whatever emotion keeps you there. Nicely written. I can feel the emotion in the poem very clearly. It brings out my own, though they may not be the same ones you put into the piece. Well done. BTW prove has one "o" not two ;).

[Ellie Qtz]

Thank you so much. When I was writing this, i felt very similar to how you when you read it. That you so much for the kind review !

Ps: Thank you for the spelling!