Giant Robots

Love poem and giant robots..... awwww

What’s more enticing than a walking
Titanium skyscraper,
Shooting lasers from its eyes and anti-tank rounds from its chest?”
Not much.
Just from the description of that
Twenty ton chunk of awesome,
My pulse quickens faster
Than the Daytona 500.
That racing,
Adrenaline induced high,
Is only comparable to the sensation felt
With a quick and incentive glance at you.

Yes, You.

The one
Whose very presence gives me
The wings of a Gundam;
The ability to escape the constraints of Earth,
And shower you with machine gun rounds of adoration.

Yes, You.

Because Optimus Prime has nothing on us.
You’re the only being powerful enough
To transform this frail vessel
Into a sex fueled cyborg
Smoother than Jazz and sweeter than Bumblebee's honey.

And I repeat.
Yes,You.

No purple photon powered light saber or nuclear engine
Could ever replace you.
Like that blue lion that forms the left arm of Voltron,
You complete me.

We're the new Roger and Dorothy.
Cruising on Big O; the Paradigm of futuristic couples.

When I'm rampaging through the city
Climbing buildings like cement colored trees,
On the back of my Iron Giant,
I'll think of you.

I'd even let you ride on my robot's shoulder
And enjoy the view.
But then again maybe not
Girls come and go but
Giant robots are always cool. 

Reviews

[Jasminekay]

Nice writing...hey if robots are your thing can you join my group...Mechanical Science Fiction. I need more people to get it started your poem is great by the way.

[joshua deathdealer]

I f-ing love Gundam and I love this write. The last couple of stanzas made me laugh. Thanks Elijah.

[unknown]

Haha really .. interesting description of this robot!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is a cool poem Elijah...........now does your love understand all this language? I bet your love does..........wow!

[Rene Velez]

did you lengthen it?

[arbitrary jane]

:) HA! this is steel and bolts cool.
"machine gun rounds of adoration'
and the repetition of 'yes, you'...
just... love the way this laughs.

[Kenneth The Poet]

This poem is ten thousand pounds of awesome.

[Rene Velez]

the was cool, I like the play with robots, brought back after school memories, you need to write more poetry Elijah, this is really good..."Giant robots are always cool."