Drunken anger

About an angry drunk and his actions

Sometimes she sits alone at night
thinking
wondering
Asking herself why

Thoughts come and go
then
Fear for her life
begin to grow

Footsteps on the stairs
A steady panting of breath

She wonders tonight
if this one will be her last
Death

She kneels by the window
Quickly begins to pray
that this night will
end real quick
that it soon will quickly
be day

The creaking of the door goes
and of the floorboards
in their minds their thinking
of what the night will involve
and can she take much more

A crash
A whack
A cruch

Hitting
Kicking
Laughing

What humiliation
what great torture

how can a man
do this to his daughter

Alone she now sits
Free for another day

Battered
Beaten
Broken

Alone she now cries
Knowing he will be back another day

To take his drunken anger
out on her again
as always

Author's Note

Just something that came into my mind I'm not saying its great just say what you think. Please

Reviews

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

I love the choice of words very precise.As much as the images may seem a bit disturbing it is reality.Sad know many young girls feel this pain.Remarkable! keep them coming.

[Ellejune]

Thanku feel free to read many more and ill read yours in return if u wish

[Dr. Wood ?]

you are getting into the groove I would say

[Ellejune]

what you mean?

[Dr. Wood ?]

You know...finding your feet......The writing is improving

[Ellejune]

Oh thankyou

[David Scott]

I think this is someone who will find a hard day of judgement...
I makes me sick to even think a father could do this in any state of mind...
;'(
A fine write.

[Ellejune]

thankyou

[KAOlmsted]

Disturbing images. Born from imagination, I hope, and not experience. Thanks for sharing.

[Ellejune]

this all comes from my mind